Blame-The-Nargles-18

I just published my first original story (I usually  write fanfiction) I would mean a lot if you could read it and give me some feedback about what I could improve on! Thank you! :)

Mp132008

Hiii!!
          I have a fanfiction also about Sokeefe:) I was thinking that I could read and vote on your book and you could read my book (and hopefully) vote on mine!!
          Let me know what you think!!
          :D
          -Mp

Mp132008

Nice!!
            Yay:)
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Blame-The-Nargles-18

@Mp132008 
            Of course! That would be awesome!! :)
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azalyme

HIII!!!
          My username used to ba moonlarkmajesty18...
          Dunno why I am even on here...

Blame-The-Nargles-18

@queenofmagic18 
            Ohh, Alicorns and Swans! Yes! Lol!
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