BiteMeHarder

I'm really a reader and not much of a writer.. but i try.. xD

and I will comment my observations of the story.. what i thought about it and the sort.. If i say it's a good story, i'm sincere about it.. don't really freaking care what you think of my opinions.. but i'm just trying to be a fair and brutally honest critic for you to improve your writing style.. 

if you don't like it.. then fine. :D