Greetings!
No new chapters today, but I have made a major revision for Spot of Mummery. I've been struggling to find a place for much of the background information regarding Amon's past. Do I put it in an Intro before the first chapter? Do I put it after the first chapter?
Nothing seemed to be meshing for me. The original version of this story was written for fans who would have a bit of idea of this background, but I wanted to make it understandable for folks who were completely new to the story as well.
So I decided to overhaul the first chapter and weave the background into what was already there. It has expanded the length of the chapter, naturally, but I think it was much needed. I also added to the second chapter just a bit and changed some of the images around to better fit the story's flow.
I'm open to feedback on all of this, so if you have a moment to give it a look, I appreciate any of your thoughts!
Have a great week!