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From Chapter Three: Bad Friend?
          	
          	JACOB:
          	Don’t hide, Lou.
          	I saw you.
          	
          	LOU:
          	That won’t help you sleep, Jay.
          	
          	JACOB:
          	Maybe not.
          	
          	JACOB:
          	But talking to you is better.
          	
          	Read Chapter Three now ❤️

ColorMeChaos

Hello! I just read a great first chapter. I do want to make a suggestion, though. Most Wattpad readers are on the app to read in short bursts. You might consider shortening your chapters so you can get people to go to the second chapter. I read to the end, but it took me a good while. Otherwise, I love JJ rn.

Author_without

@ColorMeChaos Thank you so much for reading it all the way to the end, that really means a lot to me ❤
            And you’re right about the length. I’ve been thinking about that too, the first chapter is definitely longer than what works best on Wattpad. I decided to keep it for now because it sets up Lou’s voice and the atmosphere, but I’ll definitely keep future chapters/new stories shorter and easier to read in quick bursts. Also, I’m so happy you like JJ already  That honestly made my day. Thank you for such kind and helpful feedback!
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From Chapter Three: Bad Friend?
          
          JACOB:
          Lou, I’m sorry.
          
          JACOB:
          I wasn’t in the best mood today,
          and I didn’t want to put that on you.
          
          JACOB:
          I’m really a bad friend.
          
          JACOB:
          Maybe we could see each other tomorrow?
          
          LOU:
          I’m sorry your day was like that.
          
          LOU:
          But I can’t tomorrow. I already made plans with someone :)
          
          JACOB:
          Got it. Have fun, Lou.
          
          Lou thought that was it.
          
          Then her phone lit up again.
          
          JACOB:
          Maybe the day after tomorrow? :)
          
          Read Chapter Three now ❤️

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A tiny excerpt from Chapter Two: Tomorrow Came Too Fast
          
          I rushed into the house, climbed the stairs, and shut myself in my room like a medieval king who had just been told an enemy army was already at the gates.
          
          Except the army was in my head, marching to one single phrase: little Lou, little Lou, little Lou.
          
          Read Chapter Two of Something Personal now 
          One nickname. One girl losing her mind. Totally normal, right?

Author_without

A tiny excerpt from Chapter One: Chaos
          
          “He smiled like he knew something I didn’t.
          
          Which was unfair, because I already knew too much.
          
          For example: I knew I should look away.
          
          And yet, tragically, my eyes had no survival instinct.”
          
          Read Chapter One of Something Personal now 
          Do we trust JJ’s smile… or absolutely not?

Author_without

A tiny excerpt from Chapter One: Chaos 
          
          “I could, of course, open the window and announce, ‘Hey, JJ, I’ve loved you for three years, how’s it going?’
          
          No. That would be too much… probably?”
          
          Read Chapter One of Something Personal now☀️

Author_without

Chapter 1 Chaos is available to read ❤️
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