raisinbranyum
Hello!! I love your story "24 Hours with Masky." I am curious about his intense desire to make Levi remember what happened at the Facility? I would've assumed that he would've wanted to start fresh if he genuinely likes him. It seems odd he would want Levi to be in a zombie-like state is he couldn't remember. It just felt like Masky had no issue discarding Levi. How would he be able to love him in a zombie state??
Ash54thegravekeeper
@raisinbranyum As of right now I do not see myself re-writing this. I'm one of those creators that leave the story alone once its finished. Though i may re-read it and maybe correct some grammar mistakes. The idea for the plot came from those quizzes on a what if you met the the Creepypasta's and proxies, funny enough. The out come of those quizzes being based on your answers if you survived the encounter or not. lol Maybe check out my other creepypasta stories if you liked this one. The second story is on Hoodie and a good parallel to Masky's. Although be warned the third story is not finished, but it will be as soon as i find time to get the new chapter finished. You will definitely be seeing more books from me. Writing is a fun past time for me and a way for me to relax. Hope you have a good Day/Night too!!! :D
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raisinbranyum
Wow!!! Thank you so much for your response!! That makes a lot of sense :)) Do you see yourself re-writing this or editing the story in the future? I love it so much. I probably find myself rereading it once every two months to be completely honest. The plot is just so creative, and although you wrote this in middle school, I think the writing is honestly pretty good. I hope to see more books from you in the future!! Have a good night ;)))
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Ash54thegravekeeper
@raisinbranyum If you have anymore question let me know. I'll happily answer them as best i can. ^^
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