
Gale721
Hi. So I have read Little Miss, and it was very good. I just wished it was finished. But that's okay... So long as you start uploading chapters for the sequel. Also, write it so the vampires use blood bags so the story doesn't become too rigid. Don't let Liberty find out about vampires. Also, let Versaï accept her new self quickly. I have read too many books where some characters don't see the benefit of being saved from death, even if they become something else not by choice. It's too repetitive, you know. Please consider my suggestions.

Applesfire
Hi, thank you for your suggestions. I’ve actually been struggling with how to make the story more unique and this is really helpful. Sorry for the late reply.
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