Anglquill

Hello dear!! You can also add/follow me on Facebook. We can be moots on fb also. 
          	
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applejam19

Prologue at Chapter 1, palang nababasa ko. 
          Suggest ko lang, ung prologue hindi dapat siya continuation ng chapter 1. 
          Sa prologue focus ka lang sa heartbreak ni Isabela. Dapat wala ung planong pupunta sila ng cebu. 
          
          Sa Chapter 1, pupunta na sila sa Cebu. 
          
          ung plano namn nilang pumunta sa Cebu pwedeng flashback na lang.
          
          Hindi ako expert, pero un un napansin ko.

Anglquill

@applejam19 hello, thank you for your suggestion po, noted sa susunod
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bizarrestale

@Anglquill I have read all the chapters of the story "Whisper of Love" in English translation. Even when I was reading it in English translation, I felt that this story is easy to understand. Just like a family, it has also been written beautifully in this story.
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