Andrew Campbell

@Itsa_LoveHate_Thing I may write a little excerpt about each character. A different story for each. 

I am great with character development and you haven't really gotten in deep enough like what you wrote is like the prologue something that got your attention. 

@Itsa_LoveHate_Thing I found another one of my issues. Character development. These people aren't getting described enough or have enough of a backstory for people to care for them. Something I should work on. 

@Itsa_LoveHate_Thing 

I'm glad you liked it! Only issue I had was autocorrect. But yeah, if more people like it, I'll post more! 

I will be honest. it is very hard to get your stories on here "famous." I read it and I liked it a lot. Keep up the good work. Don't get discouraged okay. (:  

@Itsa_LoveHate_Thing I just posted a story. I dunno if it'll be that successful, but if you could take the time to read it, I'd be grateful. :)

I am very excited to read your work, buttercup, I never knew you like to write!(: Update soon && Thanks for the Follow. 
          XOXO -Tecc