Allyssa18_04

NEXT CHAPTER GONNA BE UP IN AN HOUR! HERE IS A SMALL SNEAK PEAK OF IT. DONT FORGET TO VOTE AND COMMENT!
          	" zack she  is just playing you just kiss her and she will say yes" harry grinned . i glared at him.i cant believe he forgot how him and the guys became family.
          	
          	"sure why not i would love to kiss you" i could feel my checks heat  up as i saw his lips form a smirk.
          	
          	"no!"
          	
          	"oh come on shorty, say yes!"
          	
          	"you guys know the rules!" i said.
          	
          	jay laughed and said" she and her stupid rules, zack buy her a jar of nutella and she will say yes!"
          	
          	i pretended be hurt and gasped hey!. zack laughed and asked if he could come if  he would buy me one. i grinned  like a small kid.

AshutoshPathak0

@Chocolate-love-me 
          	  Wow,  I can not even, this is lovely. Keep it up.
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Allyssa18_04

NEXT CHAPTER GONNA BE UP IN AN HOUR! HERE IS A SMALL SNEAK PEAK OF IT. DONT FORGET TO VOTE AND COMMENT!
          " zack she  is just playing you just kiss her and she will say yes" harry grinned . i glared at him.i cant believe he forgot how him and the guys became family.
          
          "sure why not i would love to kiss you" i could feel my checks heat  up as i saw his lips form a smirk.
          
          "no!"
          
          "oh come on shorty, say yes!"
          
          "you guys know the rules!" i said.
          
          jay laughed and said" she and her stupid rules, zack buy her a jar of nutella and she will say yes!"
          
          i pretended be hurt and gasped hey!. zack laughed and asked if he could come if  he would buy me one. i grinned  like a small kid.

AshutoshPathak0

@Chocolate-love-me 
            Wow,  I can not even, this is lovely. Keep it up.
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Allyssa18_04

hey guys thank you so much for reading my books. i really appreciate your votes and comments. Thank you so much. i have decided every time i update i will keep updating you about it. tell me what you think about my book personally i would love to hear it. and also if you would want to give any suggestions or tips on how i could make it more better or how  i could my story make my story approachable to many out there. since i am new to this. and this is my first book which i am completing. so thank you so much once again. love you all.