Ally_Softball_00

Hope everyone enjoys my new book all the support is welcome.  I love you my readers!!! 

OliviaVanHorn9

I really enjoyed that book but I would've enjoyed more of a build up in Dylan and Gracie's relationship it seemed as if they were sad most of the time and we never really got to know Gillian or Reagan I think that if I knew the characters more and grew attached i would have cried but it didn't have much of an effect on me and I think that you could have explained Gracie's character a bit more she hated tommy one minute and then he stopped messing with her sorry for the paragraph I just felt the need to rant and let my feelings for this book fly sorry these are just some things in case you want to rewrite or edit this story and if you could check out my stories I play softball too I'm olivia I hope we could talk sometime

OliviaVanHorn9

Since I was 5 so about 9 years I'm also on my highschool team
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Ally_Softball_00

I have been playing for about 8 years. How about you? 
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OliviaVanHorn9

That's cool you seem pretty cool how long have you been playing softball?
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