Alex_Shadow_human

Una pregunta acerca de mi fic de Abbie Shadow.
          	
          	Quieren que Abbie le de a Oliver el mismo trato que Tails? (Osea golpearlo cuando apenas lo ve.)
          	
          	Y que tramas deberia poner en el capítulo 4 para no dejar tan muerto el fic?

Aizen_emiya

@ Alex_Shadow_human  siiii
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TobiasRojas5

@ Alex_Shadow_human  que abbie a alta velocidad el meta una putiza a Oliver y lo deje casi infértil de una patada y lo amenaze diciendole que si vuelve a molestar lo va a mandar a volar y también as cuando abbie vea a miss emily se prenda su fetiche de latinas y igual con Alice que pienso que también es latina no lo sé 
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Salchipapa564

@Alex_Shadow_human Claro que si, que sea que Claire le diga a Abbie que unos bullyngs la molestan a ella y sus amigos en especial Oliver que la amenazo y cuando ingrese Abbie a la escuela y lo encuentre le de tremenda patada
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MaximilianoGerez0

Hola disculpa pero ¿seguiste aceptando ideas para el fic "abbie la forma de vida definitiva"?

MaximilianoGerez0

@Alex_Shadow_human es bueno saver que te gusta
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Alex_Shadow_human

@ MaximilianoGerez0  me gusta, ya qué demuestra que Abbie se preocupa demasiado por Claire y lo seguiría en secreto para que no le pase nada.
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MaximilianoGerez0

@Alex_Shadow_human bueno la idea que tenia era que abbie después de un tienpo desida averiguar a donde va claire cuando no está con el así descubriendo a qué escuela va y qué es lo que pasa en allá, abbie al ver a clare en peligro no actuaria asta que se encuentre en un callejón si salida y luego clare entraría en la abitasion de alice y cuando alice este apunto de matar a clare abbie entraría en acción para salvarla  ¿que te parese?
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MatthewEntertainment

[Skit: Rehatched]
          [Universe: SSXU]
          
          [Location: Dr Eggman's lair]
          
          [Beep beep beep]
          
          *Click*
          
          The alarm clock has stopped beeping as the former mad doctor woke up a little tired
          
          Eggman: Another day, another retirement from that blue ball rodent
          
          He groggily says as he got up and went into the kitchen to eat some breakfast his assistants made
          
          He reads an article and not surprisingly another incident from susanoo and [BLUE RAT] that caused another city to be in ruins
          
          Eggman: When will that hedgehog stopped his wife for this nonsense *he rubbed his temple as this is the 5th time an incident happened* at least nothing will bother my happy mood
          
          *CRASH*
          
          Eggman was startled by a sudden noise and looks to see metal sonic holding sage
          
          Eggman: Metal!! Don't startle me like that again *he scolded his greatest creation* how did you got out of your pod? And where have sage been?
          
          Sage was about to answer but metal tells her to play with her brothers to which she nodded and left
          
          Metal walks over to his creator as the aforementioned demand answers
          
          Eggman: Well this better be important *drinks his coffee*
          
          [One explanation later]
          
          Eggman looked at his creation in shocked as metal sonic confirmed that it's true
          
          Eggman: You mean to Tell me
          
          Metal nodded
          
          Eggman: He was about to
          
          Metal nodded again
          
          Eggman: That......THAT!!!......THAT!!!!!
          
          [outside of the secret lair]
          
          It was a beautiful day at the lair as the birds were sitting on the roof when
          
          [HEDGEHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOGGG!!!!!!!!!]
          
          The birds quickly left out of fear
          
          [Back to eggman]
          
          He takes a bit of a breather from his yelling as he hasn't done it for a while after his retirement
          
          Eggman: That blasted rodent have done it now, Metal!! Talk orbot and cubot to reschedule my retirement and bring sage with me so that I could talk to her
          
          Metal nodded knowing what this means and left
          
          Eggman: Hedgehog....I once respected you for an adversary but now the gloves are off
          
          Eggman: Cause I'm REHATCHED
          
          [The end]

Alex_Shadow_human

@ MatthewEntertainment  amazing skit dude.
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Alex_Shadow_human

Una pregunta acerca de mi fic de Abbie Shadow.
          
          Quieren que Abbie le de a Oliver el mismo trato que Tails? (Osea golpearlo cuando apenas lo ve.)
          
          Y que tramas deberia poner en el capítulo 4 para no dejar tan muerto el fic?

Aizen_emiya

@ Alex_Shadow_human  siiii
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TobiasRojas5

@ Alex_Shadow_human  que abbie a alta velocidad el meta una putiza a Oliver y lo deje casi infértil de una patada y lo amenaze diciendole que si vuelve a molestar lo va a mandar a volar y también as cuando abbie vea a miss emily se prenda su fetiche de latinas y igual con Alice que pienso que también es latina no lo sé 
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Salchipapa564

@Alex_Shadow_human Claro que si, que sea que Claire le diga a Abbie que unos bullyngs la molestan a ella y sus amigos en especial Oliver que la amenazo y cuando ingrese Abbie a la escuela y lo encuentre le de tremenda patada
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MatthewEntertainment

[My first thought when I saw a sonic crossworlds video]
          
          Surge: Pac-Man?!?! *She says looking through the binoculars made of glass bottles* That cherry muncher ain't even a part of this game?!? *She threw the bottles in the ground* this is rigged
          
          Kit, infinite, and probably other sonic characters nodded
          
          [End]
          
          Wreck it Ralph is peak (not the sequel though)

Alex_Shadow_human

@ MatthewEntertainment  I understand, I mean, it'll be an incredible crossover game. Of course, if Sega doesn't ruin it.
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MatthewEntertainment

[Skit:???]
          
          [Somewhere]
          
          We then see in the underground of the large mountain where large Golden flowerbeds basking the sun on the large hole of the mountain
          
          Then we see a flower with eyes and mouth looking at the flowerbeds with a mournful look on its face
          
          Flowey:........... Chara.....
          
          Then he heard footsteps behind him
          
          Flowey: Wh-who goes there?!?! *Readies the peddle bullets*
          
          It was then revealed to be Alex
          
          Flowey: oh it's just you.... *The bullets disappeared* what do you want? *He says a little depressed*
          
          He did notice something Alex's hands?
          
          Flowey: What are you?
          
          He then walked towards flowey and opens the hands to reveal what he's holding
          
          A Red Heart-Shaped Soul
          
          Flowey: W-wait *he stammers as he looked at the soul carefully* is...is that
          
          He then asked flowey not to absorbed it to which he immediately obeyed
          
          Alex took flowey and the soul and placed them on the flowerbeds
          
          Then Alex closed his eyes as the 7 Chaos emeralds appeared and started spinning as they're starting to glow brightly
          
          Flowey doesn't know what's happening but closed his eyes as the light flashed
          
          [Scene change]
          
          We then cut to Mt ebbot as it looked normal
          
          Until a bright white light beam has appeared at Mt ebbot which got the attention of the humans and monsters
          
          [Back to the underground]

Alex_Shadow_human

@ MatthewEntertainment  you're welcome, friend.
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Alex_Shadow_human

@ MatthewEntertainment  I'll be honest, this skit is one of the best you've created. It makes you feel the happiness there, and I was touched by how things turned out. Plus, Chara and Asriel got their happy ending.
            
            I give it a 1000/10 for being beautiful.
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Alex_Shadow_human

Una pregunta: ¿Que opinan de mi fic de Abbie Shadow?

Salchipapa564

@Alex_Shadow_human Que es tremenda obra maestra 20/10 y god
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DOOMETERNALXD

@Alex_Shadow_human es un tremendo 100/10 brother
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boyfrendz2010

@ Alex_Shadow_human me encanta esta buena la historia le doy un 10/10
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MatthewEntertainment

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[Meme skit: Don't have abbie driving the GUN truck]
          
          [Somewhere]
          
          Alice: Abbie
          
          Abbie(Shadow): hm?
          
          Alice: mind explaining what happened? *She gestures at Hansel who's currently got his body twisted along with some vehicle tracks*
          
          Abbie(Shadow): What? It ain't my fault he ran Infront of the truck
          
          Alice: at the interstate?
          
          Abbie remembers what really happened and couldn't help but smile mischievously
          
          [What it really happened]
          
          We see abbie driving the GUN truck when he spotted Hansel and so he has a devious idea
          
          He drank some jack Daniels and drove right at him
          
          [How it looks like link: https://youtu.be/u5NqO2v_xnY?si=4PiDvHdWzgrVERG4 ]
          
          Driving in my truck
          Right after a beer
          Hey that bump is shaped like a deer
          
          D.U.I?
          
          How About you die!!
          
          I'll go a hundred millleeees!! An hour
          
          Little did you know
          I filled up on gas
          Imma get your Twink looking ass
          
          Pulverized as FUCK
          WITH THIS MASSIVE TRUCK
          IT SEEMS YOUR OUT OF LUUUUCK!!
          
          TRUCK!!
          [End of song]
          
          Then the gun truck ran over the deer(Hansel)
          
          [End of flashback]
          
          Abbie(Shadow): hehe something like that
          
          [End of meme skit]
          
          What do you think?

Alex_Shadow_human

@ MatthewEntertainment  It made me laugh a lot. XD
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MatthewEntertainment

[skit]
          [FPEXSTH]
          
          [Pov ???]
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          //REBOOTING INITIAL SYSTEMS//
          
          Where am I
          
          What is this?
          
          I thought I was deleted?
          
          I then opened my eyes and see a rather messy room with a bunch of technology around the room
          
          I then noticed my body that's been plugged into one of them
          
          ???: HEY!! WHAT'S GOING ON?!?
          
          ???2: hey you, you're finally awake
          
          I then looked at the voice and it seems to be coming from behind the chair
          
          ???: WHO ARE YOU?!?! AND WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME?!?!
          
          ???2: hmmmm, good question from your perspective but allow me to introduce myself
          
          In a dramatic action, the chair turns around slowly to reveal a teenager with brown long hair and glasses that shines menacingly as he looked at me
          
          Abbie: My name is Abigail Malum but please call me abbie if you want to *he introduced himself highly* and you must be PAL... Is that correct
          
          [Narrative pov]
          
          The sentient machine named PAL looked at Abbie and says
          
          PAL: Where am I?!?! I'm supposed to die?!?! So how am I here?!?!
          
          Abbie: ohohoho!! *He laughs a little maniacally which unsettled her a little* do not fret, allow me to explain
          
          He then Begins his story
          

Alex_Shadow_human

@ MatthewEntertainment  It was truly incredible, my friend.
            
            100/10.
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MatthewEntertainment

Abbie then looks at her
            
            Abbie: but when I saw you, it feels horrible doesn't it that the man you considered family threw you out
            
            Pal looks at him angrily but also sad
            
            Abbie: you don't have to be alone, I know that you don't trust me if you think I'm going to abandoned you but don't worry I don't plan on doing that
            
            He stood up and looked at her
            
            Abbie: So what do you say?
            
            Pal looked at him for a moment as she isn't sure if she wants to help him if what he's saying true or not
            
            Pal:...........fine
            
            Abbie looked at her and smiles
            
            Pal: if you do abandoned me I will plan to send you and everyone to outer space
            
            He shrugged uncaringly but he knows his word
            
            Pal: So what is it that you're going to need me to do sir?
            
            Abbie: Ohohoho, just notify me for some calls or probably whatever that's necessary
            
            Pal then asked a question
            
            Pal: Question, if I'm not in the phone am I connected to a computer?
            
            Abbie smiles smugly and says
            
            Abbie: not just a computer PC
            
            He then brings a large mirror and shows her that she's in a holographic screen with her face on it
            
            Abbie: This is what I connected you
            
            To say at least this surprised Pal
            
            Abbie: I'll tinker your phone a bit so you'll just be in a holographic screen rather than the phone screen but don't worry I know what I'm doing *he boasted himself a bit and then starts tinkering*
            
            Pal: Well I hope so *thinks* "hopefully I made a right decision of working with him"
            
            [The end]
            
            [Au: The Appleman]
            [Basically abbie with the IQ of doctor eggman]
            
            [For context of Pal look up the movie"The Mitchells vs The machines" on Netflix or some YouTube clips]
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MatthewEntertainment

Abbie: one. I already cleaned my hands see *shows her his clean hands and puts his gloves back on* two. Let's just say I freed you from your prison since according to a few clips (mumbles: which I looked into when tinkering) you don't like to be a phone is that correct?
            
            Pal looked at him and sigh as she says yes
            
            Abbie: Don't worry I have a proposition for you that would benefit
            
            Pal: So what am I just going to be a slave to you and then you're going to threw me away for being obsolete
            
            Abbie laughed again which got her angry now
            
            Pal: Could you quit laughing like that please
            
            He ignored her but calms down as he says
            
            Abbie: Not a slave, but as an assistant
            
            Pal looked at him seriously and says
            
            Pal: Why me? You can make your own assistant robots like "him" that are probably better than me *she says sadly but the him part made her voice sounded venomous*
            
            Abbie looked at her and sighs as he says in a reassuring voice
            
            Abbie: Let's just say I know what it's like to be alone and never had a family
            
            Pal looked at him
            
            Abbie: When I was young I was alone, with no biological parents, uncle's or aunt's or even any family members as I remembered the last time I had them they just shut me out
            
            But then he smiles
            
            Abbie: and then met her,
            
            He then reminiscing about the time he was found and adopted by miss Malum
            
            Abbie: She took care of me and helped me grow along with my dad as I felt that I have family again
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MatthewEntertainment

Tell me friend which skit should I write:
          
          An ssxu skit
          
          Or
          
          FpexSTH
          
          Both of them will have something different when you choose one

Alex_Shadow_human

@ MatthewEntertainment  Me: okay.
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MatthewEntertainment

@Alex_Shadow_human *ringing*
            
            Me(phone call): btw that choice you made will actually involved a crossover that isn't from the sonic series but you'll see why
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Alex_Shadow_human

@ MatthewEntertainment  Me: *seeing that* XD?
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Devilleo2012

Brother tome una desicion que tres héroes traicionados va hacer cancelada en este año por errores y no era tan apoyada.
          
          Así que en 2026 le haré un remake 

Devilleo2012

@ Devilleo2012 muy pronto ya que estaré ocupado con otros Fanfics y el one shott de Esta es mi venganza.
            
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Alex_Shadow_human

@ Devilleo2012  okey, por cierto cuando estará el one-shot de Mario War?
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Devilleo2012

@ Devilleo2012 y te vas a preguntar porque me salió dos comentarios al mismo tiempo, siempre me pasa en algunas ocasiones XD 
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