AkornDefalko

Sullivan Siblings is done! Thank you all for the reads, votes and comments!

Saphire_Skyes

@AkornDefalko Oh no no I don't mind at all! Take all the time you need. Fall ball is not going anywhere anytime soon
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AkornDefalko

@Saphire_Skyes Thank you! Sorry it is taking me so long to read The Fall Ball. I read it when I have the time to sit down otherwise I won’t be able to catch all the edit suggestions.
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Saphire_Skyes

@AkornDefalko You must be relieved! Kudos on the splendid accomplishment!
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AkornDefalko

Sullivan Siblings is done! Thank you all for the reads, votes and comments!

Saphire_Skyes

@AkornDefalko Oh no no I don't mind at all! Take all the time you need. Fall ball is not going anywhere anytime soon
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AkornDefalko

@Saphire_Skyes Thank you! Sorry it is taking me so long to read The Fall Ball. I read it when I have the time to sit down otherwise I won’t be able to catch all the edit suggestions.
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Saphire_Skyes

@AkornDefalko You must be relieved! Kudos on the splendid accomplishment!
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AkornDefalko

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AkornDefalko

@KrystenAmador7 I’m sorry I don’t have social media :/
            If I ever get it, I’ll let you know ASAP
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KrystenAmador7

@AkornDefalko ty girl and I understand ☺️
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KrystenAmador7

@AkornDefalko ya ik I'm going to miss you so much your my best friend
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Saphire_Skyes

Hey, I just wanna say THANK YOU SO MUCH for leaving all those comments and picking up on everything I missed. The second draft of 'Fall Ball' is coming along rather well thanks to your help. I'm so sorry for the difficulty in reading caused by the typo-ridden first draft of 'Fall Ball'. I'm grateful you kept reading regardless of the many typos and other errors you stumbled upon. And please do not feel obliged to continue! If you want to stop reading because of the errors, I will totally understand! I'm working on editing it into an error-free story.

Saphire_Skyes

@AkornDefalko Thank you! I will try by best to polish it up for the second draft
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AkornDefalko

@Saphire_Skyes First of all, I LOVE all the character names. How OBLIVIOUS can Chase be?? SMH. I thought it was something bad happened between Della and Lucy but now I think they more do drifted apart after a smaller incident. 
            My only constructive criticism: add a little more detail to the dialogue. Not what the characters are saying, but the setting around them. You do do this, but sometimes you don’t.
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Saphire_Skyes

@AkornDefalko OMG YOU ARE???? I was so afraid you were losing interest becoz of the errors or forcing urself to read it XD I'd love to hear about what u think of the story so far!
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DreLeonWrites

Ah! Loving the updates over the sivallian siblings

DreLeonWrites

@AkornDefalko can’t wait
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AkornDefalko

@DreLeonWrites 6 chapters left. There will be a sequel lol
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AkornDefalko

@DreLeonWrites Thanks! The book is just about finished!
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DreLeonWrites

I'm sorry glad u were able to do completed books I can't wait to dive into them

AkornDefalko

@DreLeonWrites I have about a 100 started lol. Sadly, 3/4 of those are on paper but one day I’ll get the on here
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DreLeonWrites

That’s a lot considering how much I got completed or actully completed u write a lot of chapters that I’ll be able to invest them
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AkornDefalko

@DreLeonWrites Thanks. Only 2 are complete lol
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axelle_grace14

Hey! I hope you’re having a great day/evening. I just wanted to thank you for reading my book and pointing out things that I might have missed. I really appreciate your support. ♡︎
          
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axelle_grace14

@AkornDefalko honestly, I would love to hear your feedback. Feel free to let me know when you see something ❤️
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AkornDefalko

@axelle_grace14 Do you mind if I point out edit/grammar mistakes? 
            I like the book already!
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