ton10p

could you post the origonal versions of your books to read during your "rewrite"

Nightengail

Ok, i didn’t notice that your second book for jasper was in fact a second book until I found the first book, talking about a couple events that had been sort of mentioned in said second book.  I didn’t even know that the second book had a first, because it talked about how you knew them before and I just thought: cool ominous backstory.
          
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