AegisXyston

@Athanos thank you so much for reading my book and thank you once again for appreciating my work. I do hope you like the rest of my works. Feel free to leave a comment with any constructive criticism if you don't. Have a good time reading.  :) ^•^

@RedheadWasp thank you for your response. I really appreciate it. Don't worry about being harsh, this advices you gave me are really helpful and made me start thinking about how I can improve my work and  have as little plot holes as possible. That's why it is taking me so long to update. :)
            
            Thank you very much once more <3

@RedheadWasp hi. Thank for you message. I really appreciate you showing so much enthusiasm fory work. <3
            
             Sorry for the very late reply. I have read your work. Your writing skills are fine I must say. But I would suggest you work on your story arc and plot points. 
            
            Writing a story that gives an alternative pov while following canon is very very tricky. If you're going to be deviating from canon, you need to make it clear in the foreword/summary.
            Also, for the particular plotline that you have decided to pursue, you will encounter many plot holes like —
            
            -why does Hermione, who doesn't trust the Half blood prince's text book, decide to pick up an unknown notebook and hide it from the authorities? That's very unlike Hermione. What made her do that?
            
            - if the story follows the canon plot, how will you reconcile the Dramione pairing with the canon events? And when?
            Etc
            
            There may be many others inconsistencies that may pop up that you may have to retcon. So you will need to think about these in advance if you want your plot to be understandable and smooth.
            
            Sorry if that was too harsh. If you want more pointers feel free to DM me anytime. I'll try my best to respond.
             
            Have a great day. :)

@Secretfandomacc Okay! 

@Secretfandomacc thank you so much. I agree, this is a more light hearted book. My other book , also dramione, Redemption, is more intense. You can check it out to see if it suits your tastes better. 

@potterfanfics0304 thanks!!

@potterfanfics0304 hi! I did take a look at your work. I don't read Imagines, so I just read a couple of chapters to get a general idea of things you could possibly improve. I  suggest you draw a character map of the pov character so that there are no weird discrepancies. Also it would help to research the other main characters involved in the book and get an idea of the character arcs you want them to have in your story. Also review your work at least twice to clear out grammatical mistakes and typos. You can inbox me if you want more advice. I'll try to reply whenever possible.
            
            Hope this helps. Thank you. :)

@HottestSlytherin thank you! <3 xoxo

@AegisXyston great I look forward to reading it

@StoryLoverMariaS yup. As I've already mentioned, I'm too lazy to make a new cover. :D so yeah. I'll just continue updating the same book. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ 

@AegisXyston will the sequel be in the same "book" as WinK?

@areztas thank you so much! No probs. I love all my readers and I appreciate the time they spend on my books. Thank you again for your support! 

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@NKennn thank you so much! :) ^.^

@AegisXyston wah I cant wait for the sequel, I really love the story, hi from Indonesia. Keep up the good work

@ItzFallenAngel275 thank you so much! <3 ^•^

@Polgara1987 thank you so much! XX <3