I DO care about that one little person who is willing to take the time to give constructive feedback. I will admit that my ability as an author to maintain good flow is severely lacking. To me, it's an aspect of good writing that I barely know how to begin to improve. It's a difficult thing to improve (for me, anyway). I wish everybody that read the first chapter or two and then decided not to read any farther would take the time to tell me why. Thank you for that. Once I finish this story, I will definitely be going over it very thoroughly, with a focus on enhancing flow and ease of reader understanding/comprehension of my concepts.
