CaY--cAy

Hey, thanks so much for reading and voting on my story❤️ I appreciate it tons!

CaY--cAy

@97Potterhead79 I'm glad you're enjoying it :) If you're interested in reading book 2, may I suggest reading it on Inkitt? It's slightly more edited along with brand new scenes over on Inkitt but it is incomplete, unfortunately lol XD
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97Potterhead79

@CaY--cAy it's a pleasure but I found your story on Inkitt so I moved over, prefer reading on there. 
            But I am enjoying the story soooo much.
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SusanKSaltos

Thanks so much for all the votes on Summer Lovin’ and Fallin’ for You! I really appreciate it! Feel free to go back and leave some honest comments. I’m totally open to constructive criticism!

SusanKSaltos

@97Potterhead79 thanks for your comments. I know I did rush Summer and Jesse’s book. Part of that was because they already knew each other from talking on the phone in college. I’ve had thoughts of writings some phone conversations in as possibly flashbacks, but I’m not sure yet. And Dana and Colt had grown up together, so they already knew each other as well. I hope I showed how even if you “know” someone, you probably don’t really “know” them very well at all unless they open up to you and you do the same.
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97Potterhead79

@SusanKSaltos So sorry about my delayed response, had a hectic few days. The only thing that I can think of is, that the ending to both stories felt a bit rushed. The characters were well developed and gave the reader a sense of who they were and who they have become individually. Maybe if you could add a bit more regarding their relationships (Summer and Jamie) and (Dana and Colt). I am sorry i am not sure if i am getting my point across?
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SusanKSaltos

Aw, thank you so much! That’s so sweet of you to say!!! Both these books have done well on Wattpad, I’m thinking of selling them on Amazon. Do you have any comments on anything that annoyed you or you wished happened that didn’t?  Any suggestions for improvement at all? I’d like to ensure that the books are the best they can be before I try to sell them!
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ZainabFatima2525

Hey I would be very great full if you check my book and review about it
          
          Thank you and sorry to disturb :)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/255597515?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=ZainabFatima2525&wp_originator=ZM%2BhuxPX0NJGSS51jKsDyZ3DhmIkfRMis%2BcIwbAG1oEVsGoRoWjRIh1LfraezZnJon%2FI6GhqAW2FKAwJhx61qtKVByWBhZgvlDE7Pl1qHUJIJp6f5pI9JaZIeh6IGWNs

ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3

97Potterhead79

@ScarlettBlackDaisy Hi there, I absolutely loved your story, the writing was brilliant, the plot was well thought out. You should be so proud of yourself.
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ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3

97Potterhead79

@ScarlettBlackDaisy I just finished Knowing Xavier. I loved it, the imperfect characters, the plot, the real life tragedies that people go through everyday. It was so well written, and a pleasure to read. You should be so proud of yourself.
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relativiteaa

 thought I should drop by and say thank you for listing my story, The Silver Queen, in your reading list. It’s not the best out there, but I hope you still find it worthwhile. Have a nice day and, health-wise, stay safe!

relativiteaa

@97Potterhead79 ❤️
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97Potterhead79

@relativiteaa, Its my pleasure, stay safe on your side as well.
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