00pommwrite

Okay so I changed a bit in chapter one of book 2. That chapter got some comments about how Alyssa can't prioritize and that Aegon's happiness is apparently more important than her helping her mother. Every time I got a comment like that I was honestly a little surprised because that wasn't the point, and that was not how I wanted to portray Alyssa. Her wills wasn't written out well, not in the way I had in mind for the character.
          	
          	So let me explain to everyone here now so I don't have to think about it anymore. (Talking about chapter one so if you've read to chapter forty this may not apply.) In the beginning she wants to help her mother, but she's not that straightforward and demanding when it comes to such things. I'm trying to write her as a more rational woman (at least she's becoming more and more rational), and rational people wouldn't just start a fight that the person knows won't lead to anything good. Not to mention that she has been married to Aegon for nearly 10 years and knows that he is sensetive and can be impulsive, perhaps she knows when and when not to provoke him. (Or whatever it's called, I don't remember.)
          	
          	So sorry everyone, it was my fault and I thought I had explained something in the book that I apparently hadn't. 
          	
          	(Also beyond that. Just a small thing. If you don't like the book, don't read it. I'm a little tired of some people who just spout hate about the character being this or that, too much or too little. This spread of negativity is completely unnecessary and doesn't make me any more eager to write more.)
          	
          	If there is any questions about it, maybe I did a mistake like I have now, then please ask. But there is no reason to be rude about it. It is not an easy thing to write a book and have everyone enjoy it.
          	
          	Thanks!
          	
          	❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

ItsElla12344

I don’t want to be a bother but did you delete your stories?? 

00pommwrite

@ItsElla12344 Thank you❤️❤️❤️❤️ 
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ItsElla12344

Ohh okay well if it helps I thought they were really good! But good luck with the rewriting and can’t wait to read them!! 
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00pommwrite

Okay so I changed a bit in chapter one of book 2. That chapter got some comments about how Alyssa can't prioritize and that Aegon's happiness is apparently more important than her helping her mother. Every time I got a comment like that I was honestly a little surprised because that wasn't the point, and that was not how I wanted to portray Alyssa. Her wills wasn't written out well, not in the way I had in mind for the character.
          
          So let me explain to everyone here now so I don't have to think about it anymore. (Talking about chapter one so if you've read to chapter forty this may not apply.) In the beginning she wants to help her mother, but she's not that straightforward and demanding when it comes to such things. I'm trying to write her as a more rational woman (at least she's becoming more and more rational), and rational people wouldn't just start a fight that the person knows won't lead to anything good. Not to mention that she has been married to Aegon for nearly 10 years and knows that he is sensetive and can be impulsive, perhaps she knows when and when not to provoke him. (Or whatever it's called, I don't remember.)
          
          So sorry everyone, it was my fault and I thought I had explained something in the book that I apparently hadn't. 
          
          (Also beyond that. Just a small thing. If you don't like the book, don't read it. I'm a little tired of some people who just spout hate about the character being this or that, too much or too little. This spread of negativity is completely unnecessary and doesn't make me any more eager to write more.)
          
          If there is any questions about it, maybe I did a mistake like I have now, then please ask. But there is no reason to be rude about it. It is not an easy thing to write a book and have everyone enjoy it.
          
          Thanks!
          
          ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

00pommwrite

Hello! Just wanted to say that updates in the future will be tough, because I will write as many chapters as possible and then publish them at the same time. Right now I have been planning the event for about two chapters and started writing one. And how long this will take depends, I always say it will take a while but then I get bored an publish anyway. So you never know.
          
          But thank you all so much for your support and I appreachiate it❤️❤️

00pommwrite

I am aware that what happened in my last chapter may have caused readers to get a little angry with me. I suppose anyway. And to avoid any surprises, I want to Say that the dance of the dragons is nothing more than a tragic event and I can't say that this book will have very cozy or pleasant moments hereafter. However, I can say that Alyssa will not just break down and become an emotional cold shell. I have plans for her and she will want to seek her own revenge. I really don't hope that many people have decided to stop reading the book because I really try to make my story so memorable and yet so realistic as possible (Like how it would be if this was included in the show/book.) Because I know that many dislike completely twisted versions and still want to stick to the event of the story. 
          
          Thanks for reading this message and leave a reply if you feel like it❤️

MaterWelonhehe

@00pommwrite GIRL YOUR STORYLINE IS AMAZING - I LOVE HOW TWISTED EVERYTHING IS AND THE WAY YOU GIVE EVERY CHARACTER, INCLUDING YOUR OC, SUCH A PROFOUND CHARACTER ANALYSIS AND EVALUATION. IT‘S ABSOLUTELY AMAZING AND I LOVE HOW YOUR FIC EXTINGUISHES ITSELF FROM OTHERS - it’s so refreshing reading a fic, where everything is so twisted and complex that you can’t manifest on one side solely, instead reading the stereotypical daughter of Nyra, who burns everything down at any chance given. I love reading your fic! And I’m sure many others do as well! <3
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