Writer_Sama12

Hey, you don't have to if u don't want. But I have an original story HOW TO: Survive Inside this Forsaken World with Me!! That i started posting on here. I have eight chapters up so far, and try to update it every other day or so.I am trying to gain critique so I can become a better writer. I definitely need to better myself. I would really appreciate any feedback on what you think of my characters as well, because I'm trying to make sure they can become realistic and well rounded. So I'm open to any criticism.