Goldeon666
Hey all you out there who enjoy AngelDust ships. I had a crazy idea that doesn't appear to be anywhere on wattpad.
AngelDustXSir Pentious.
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Heads up my people, I am going to attempt to write a SonicXSilver, any advise will be welcomed because I know almost NOTHING about the SonicVerse
Goldeon666
Hey I was wondering if someone could read one of my OC and give me some feed back, I could really use some but no one seems to be reading it so I don't know if it's any good. Its called Zombie Apocolyps, I made it in High School for a college entry but I really need some opinions.
Goldeon666
@AbbyGenty yeah I'm going to be doing a lot of re-writing to it, but I wanted to get feedback so I knew where to fix things
AbbyGenty
@Goldeon666 Some of your paragraphs are to long and need to be spaced out properly. And your chapters are to short maybe make them about 2-3 thousand words long i make mine roughly 6,000 or more words for my stories. Maybe put a bit more detail in the characters and their surrounding and what their doing or about to do. To give a broader perspective for them and readers reading your work. So their more immersed and feel like the readers are apart of your story. Just my opinion though but it's your story so do what ya wish so far it's ok but just me in liking longer stories so to each there own.
Goldeon666
Hey followers I need help trying to type one of my fics. would one of you be willing to set aside some time to help me out? I tried asking my GF for help but that went up in flames. The fic I'm working on is "Can They Be Trusted"
Goldeon666
@Monntiger I'm basically having the voice thats been in his head be Fearlings. They start taking over his body in a nutshell, His Bones, muscles, skin stretching much longer then normally possible as his nails grow in length in an unnatural way as his eyes will become black with almost like a gold mixed with ice blue ring cat eye slit, and his teeth growing longer and sharper. But my problem is I have no idea how to describe the pain hes going through, so I'm hoping someone can. You'll obviously get a mention in the story since its your idea.
GoldGamezALot
@Goldeon666 Hey! It would mean a lot to me if you could read my Harry Potter OC story! I really need constructive criticism to make it better! Thank you!
Goldeon666
@GoldGamezALot I would love to read your story and give you some notes. Send me a link when you have time
Goldeon666
hey all I'm looking for a BunnyMund story but I can't remember the name, just that bunny somehow gets turned into a human and he Jack start having feeling for one another
Goldeon666
Looking for a fic! TW for Abuse and R@pe
The first one, I *think* it takes place before and during 6th year. Snape rescues Draco from his father at Malfoy Manner because Lucius was beating Draco (I believe it's because he refused to take the Mark), Snape took Draco to Harry's place at the Dursley's, aharry grudgingly let him stay as long as the Dursley's didn't find out. After Snape leaves, Harry helps patch Draco up, then Vernon comes home, Harry has Draco hide in his closet, then Draco watches (in horror) as Harry is beaten half to death, Draco calls Snape who takes them to a safe house. They spend the rest of the summer there, at first arguing, then slowly bonding after going clubbing and helping each other with night terrors. They form a Bond as the summer goes. Snape refuses to tell Dumbledore where they are (Dumbledore is bad in this fic, Ron is also not so good) and when they return to school, Draco is given his own rooms for his safety, Harry spends most of his time there as he's being bullied by Ron and others for being with Draco. Dumbledore tries to threaten Harry if he keeps sleeping anywhere other than his dorm, something happens (can't remember what) and Harry is suddenly staying with Draco full time. Hermione came by at one point to get the full story, then she came back another time because Ron hit her. Other stuff happens, then Harry gets kidnapped, Lucius rapes him, Draco can feel what's happening due to their bond, then Harry is rescued, Voldy is defeated, yay.
Goldeon666
@Monntiger So I don't think it actually exists I may have dreamt it. But if your still interested I could always write it.
Monntiger
@Goldeon666 is don't know it but if you clock on a tag on a story of the word Drarry it will take you to a list of the stories, please let me know if you find it I would like to read it
Goldeon666
help, I can't find a story.
its a Snarry/Drarry and later Tomarry, Mpreg
Harry is mute due to a spell Tom created but Albus-to many names used, he turns to the dark side and eventually he gets his voice back, but I can't find it or remember the name
Goldeon666
Hey everyone, unfortunaly due to extreme Writers Block all my writings are on Suspension, I hate this as much as the next person but unfortunaly I can't write, I need people to talk to about my writing, but I have no one to talk to so it's making this really hard for me, but if anyone wishes to lend a hand, I will be most grateful.
GalaxiaDraconican
@Goldeon666 100% relatable *looks at all the books I have pending but don't have any inspiration for*
Goldeon666
Hey everyone, I am reaching out and asking if someone would like to help out on and Danny Phantom head trip story