Sixteen year old Naito Raizu never got to see his mother before she passed away. Her dying wish was for him to fulfill his destiny as king of the Zodiac Empire. With a destiny on his shoulders that only he can fulfill, Naito will do anything to make his mother proud. But it's far easier said than done. Only three hour...
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