Harvey Demise

I am a creator of Alternative Universes using ideas of what if or what would happen if story elements were changed. 

I want to create universes with actions that have consequences, serious and matures tones which will include NSFW / 18+ content however, it is the characters that are the most important of the story.

Interaction and reaction are the most difficult parts of presenting and even becoming that character which is also the most intriguing. 

I do not care about ratings or even if my story is barely read, it's the story I want to represent and the concept behind it that I want to aspire in people.

I want others to create and change ideas how they see fit whether for the better or for the worse because in the end the most important part of the story is the concept, not the story itself.

I hope I can inspire or be critiqued about my work, so how would you change a story?