travallene_V

Hey it's been a long time since I wrote something in romance, and your stories seem to be amazing!! If you've a moment to spare could you read the story and give me the feedback?? Any kind of Constructive Feedback is helpful!! Thank you!!
          Here is the link to the short story!!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/339812088?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=travallene_V&wp_originator=D49Awh5JvgGUcWFro5jjotDtzlfeJkzMp%2FozOFc6ll6JVEy%2BpHh3gJ2PiRFi8nqGgXDNlqUJ33DiV9LsE3iUQ5hvLUw7s4F4fSTILkMgXRpidwSkGnqu2FRKM5IYLmry