@Gojosbigdick So when I write my chapters, I keep an open tab on my screen with the episode, I rewrite the dialog, and add Y/n into the conversation along the way. There are some episodes where there are a lot of time skips which can look pretty bad when writing and the reader won't feel engaged if you change the situation every 200 words so what I do to help is add scenes in the middle like in my latest chapter 58 there is a time skip between Nami getting sick to them meeting Wapol and since it was too quick and didn't show Y/n's reaction and possible trauma from her backstory, I added a few scenes to describe the situation to help the readers hopefully understand the fear that comes with having no Doctor on the ship especially when you don't know with what your friend is sick with. I'm very excited to read your One Piece story so if you need any tips or maybe just to talk I'll be more than happy to