@KrisTime15 Oh, no problem :) Your plot got my attention :) I've watched such type of stories but I haven't read anything like that so I'm really looking forward to your story :) don't worry I'm in no position to criticize your work since I'm a newbie writer too (Let's not talk about me hihihihi) anywho, just expect my reactions and comments about your work I don't give Hard criticism since like what I have said I'm in no position after all :)