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KandaceGraham
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I love your story very much an I was wondering if you would read my story his secret under my control for feedback
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owo--blyat
I just finished your story. I really liked it ,I really like the characters development, and you have a good story line ,I would honestly like you to continue it. The only bad thing I can say is you made some grammar mistakes in couple of chapters, so maybe you could go back and re edit it ,other than that I liked it
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