sudereadss

hey I just finished reading your book called outlaw vampire I can honestly say It was amazing and last three chapters make my cry so much that I had difficulty keep reading and the ending make me crave for more I was wondering if you would make a sequel?

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PaulsMrs

Oh this isn't good, im really sorry, but between the bad grammer, badly constructed sentences and bad dialogue..it's not great. I've tried to read several chapters and it's horrible. You need to learn to write and understand English before you publish, and then have someone review it for you and edit it. I dont know how old you are but its very very childish. I'm not saying this to be mean, I even read through several chapters to give it a descent go, but honestly I couldn't continue. You can get books that teach you how to write, constructing paragraphs and sentences. I don't know what your other "books" are like but this one doesn't give a good first impression. 

uniquegirl2002

@user49388212 I will make sure I see to your suggestions when I start editing the book. Thank u for your feedback 
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user49388212

@PaulsMrs its true the book mated to the alpha king is so childish and unrealistic. You need to make them more mature as i can see you have a great story
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uniquegirl2002

Im sorry you think that for one of my books. If you don’t mind me asking which one? I want to improve my work so it isn’t bad. I appreciate your honesty. It will allow me to reflect and improve. 
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4thpowermama

Hi!! Thank you so much for adding More Than This and Guarded Hope to your reading list!

uniquegirl2002

 I'll have to decide that I when I read guarded hope
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4thpowermama

Ah thank you!!! I will admit that Guarded Hope was my first ever story, so it’s kind of rough. I actually think the second book, Waiting For Hope is much better.  
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uniquegirl2002

More than this was an amazing story I loved it, I hope guarded hope is just as good. No need to say thank you, I should say that to u for writing a good story. 
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