kaifromthesea

God I love SQ tiktoks... https://vm.tiktok.com/ZMR7fjXnt/

Misty4Mark

I just LOVE this story, (loving Emma Swan) And as I finished 16, I SO wanted to keep reading, but as I went to scroll up and it telling that this was the end,  I got bummed,  because I thought there was SO MUCH more, so is there another story that has this same storyline? Please keep this story going.....
          Thanks,  @Misty4Mark ❤ ❤

kaifromthesea

It’s not over, I have been writing but haven’t been posting lately. Be patient 
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Misty4Mark

Again I finished Loving Emma Swan, AND I SO DON'T WANT this to be the end, I want to read about how she changes the laws AND then marries Regina, how they rebuild the castle in Everlast (sorry I just remember the first part of Regina's home town) I can see them moving there, but then I'm sure Emma will go on to be a queen with Regina's help ruling, but your the author SO please keep writing,  because yes I can see your ending it here, BUT I wanted to see the outcome of their lives, because Gina couldn't give birth, so now do they adopt those 2 kids, or I'm sure Em could have kids, either by insemination or on a day away from Gina she might get raped, but her being a Queen I don't think so, but your the author ☺️ I just don't want this story to end
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Misty4Mark

I'm back, and I'm glad that you're updating the story, and obviously I've read this before but it's been awhile and I've been reading other stories, I feel like I'm reading this story from the biggining again, and I've fallen in love with this story and I can't wait for the next chapter, thank you for writing!!

Misty4Mark

Kai, AND thats just it, I meant NO harm,  just like the rest of your reader's we LOVE the story that your telling, and thats just WHAT you should do!! I'm an editor at heart, and when I see anything that is wrong, I just want to fix it,  and honey I've been told off before,  SO I get it,  but not really since I can't help it! Because I just want you to perfect the story and be published!! But that's a good thing to stop 1 story,  so you can focus on a singular story,  and hopefully you'll come back to this story and complete it!!! I really hope that you liked the story ideas I sent you, for the future maybe?

sqfan2

@Misty2Dorothea  yes we love kai's story's, but i honesty don't think your comments are helpful more like.......upseting. i don't think it's your place to like, try and 'fix' anything because the story's are amazing. and have you ever thought that maybe kai  dosen't want your help?oh yh and   this is me trying to help you for the futer, that some people might not like your comments even people who arn't the author.
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Misty4Mark

Kai, No No feelings hurt, and I understand that Em wants to leave before her 18th birthday, which I think is in the begging of the Christmas break,  or in the middle, but get her to go with Gina for the Christmas break and let her feelings change to get her thinking about how having a diploma, could benefit,  life so let her not leave and let her love for Gina develop like it is.....