@kaifromthesea
For anyone who's wondering if I accidentaly posted the new chapter on Just fire, no it was intentional. Two times. But for some reason it goes back into draft after a few hours either way and it doesn't even notify me. If anyone experianced this, and knows whats going on, please tell me!
Yes your right, thank you for putting your 2 cents in.....
This WAS SO great, and now I can't wait until the next chapter dear!!! Thank you
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Kai, NO problem, please excuse my ideas then, and I'll pray to read the full story in the future!!!!
Kai, AND thats just it, I meant NO harm, just like the rest of your reader's we LOVE the story that your telling, and thats just WHAT you should do!! I'm an editor at heart, and when I see anything that is wrong, I just want to fix it, and honey I've been told off before, SO I get it, but not really since I can't help it! Because I just want you to perfect the story and be published!! But that's a good thing to stop 1 story, so you can focus on a singular story, and hopefully you'll come back to this story and complete it!!! I really hope that you liked the story ideas I sent you, for the future maybe?
@Misty2Dorothea yes we love kai's story's, but i honesty don't think your comments are helpful more like.......upseting. i don't think it's your place to like, try and 'fix' anything because the story's are amazing. and have you ever thought that maybe kai dosen't want your help?oh yh and this is me trying to help you for the futer, that some people might not like your comments even people who arn't the author.
Kai, No No feelings hurt, and I understand that Em wants to leave before her 18th birthday, which I think is in the begging of the Christmas break, or in the middle, but get her to go with Gina for the Christmas break and let her feelings change to get her thinking about how having a diploma, could benefit, life so let her not leave and let her love for Gina develop like it is.....
Kai, Um, you can't just leave me hanging like this, obviously Gina's head over heels for Em, and I believe Em's starting to fall, if she hasn't already, and I think there going to Gina's family for Christmas IS a good thing!!cause I see them sharing a bed, nothing happens until they get caught under the mistletoe and the family is chanting for them to kiss, and instead of on the cheek they share their first kiss, which reveals their true feelings.....
And dear, I understand about their holding back, on the no sex, but please they at least have to have a first kiss.....
I found Loving Emma Swan, and I feel that this is the story that you said you were rewriting and I do like this start of the story better!! And I feel that I've read this before but here's where I'll stop suggesting how to fix it, so off to read.....
WHY??? I WAS LOVING THIS STORY, WHY DID YOU DELETE IT?? WAS it because of my constant trying to help fix it? All you needed to do was tell me to stop it, AND I would have!!!
I'm sorry, Misty
@Misty2Dorothea again, I appreciate it, but I do have my stories fully planned out already.
@kaifromthesea , No I think your stories are great, but I'm just trying to help make them even better!! I wasn't trying to make you feel insecure or embarrassed but your writing! And that's just it, you sould only concentrate on 1 story at a time, just when you have an idea for another story, write it down, so it can be your next story I get it, and I hope my ideas for the story actually inspire you to keep writing on this story!!
@Misty2Dorothea I appreciate your comments and help. I didn't delete the story, I unpublished it. I do feel really insecure about my writing and since I am concentrating on another story currently your comments didn't really help with my confidence. I write these for fun and decided to publish whatever I come up with regardless I am fully pleased with it or not because not posting won't make the story go on and people might enjoy it anyway. I do adore how you think so highly about Lessons but I don't, and I think it won't be updated soon. I could have asked you to stop but that wouldn't have stopped people asking for an update or if I will keep writing so I made a decisions impulsively cause I am an impulsive person, so sorry, if that caused you stress. Hope there's no harm done.