jimlong3

Hi all! I've posted new story in the horror genre called "Equity". Please take a look and let me know how you like it.
          	

katkeenan

Thanks for checking out and voting on Never Go Home!  ❤️

katkeenan

@jimlong3 Thank you so much!  I've never looked too much into scene beats, so that's good to know.   I've just focused on making everything count in NGH. (which is something I need to do in my non-wattpad published novel). I'm glad to see you're still enjoying it. :)
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jimlong3

@katkeenan Hi! You're entirely welcome. You have a great sense of story, and your scene beats are right on. Can't wait to read more of the story.
            
            Best,
            Jim
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Alva_Eriksson

Hello, Jim! I really appreciate all your votes on Ardent!

Alva_Eriksson

@jimlong3 That is very kind of you to say! I'm lucky to have a great proof reader to turn to. Thank you for the follow as well!
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jimlong3

@Alva_Eriksson Thanks Alva! It's such a pleasure to read a Wattpad story that has good flow and character development, and that has been well edited. I am thoroughly enjoying it.
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