I’m loving your book there’s so much drama! Oml love it.
First books are always a challenge trust me I literally went through hell writing my first few books like idk they were really out there but you get better and better the more you write. Maybe something you can do is write longer povs is read of switching them a lot, and maybe just do gifs instead of always doing pictures but that’s just my preference cause I love gifs. But honestly other then that it’s really good!