fluffy-marco

I'm a liar, I'm back cause this app is my dirty little secret and I can't stay away from it. If you haven't noticed I've taken down some stories, namely do to me not remember where I wanted go with them and no longer being interested in the story. I'm sorry if you liked these stories but I'll be posting new ones soon. Hope you all are well 

fluffy-marco

I'm a liar, I'm back cause this app is my dirty little secret and I can't stay away from it. If you haven't noticed I've taken down some stories, namely do to me not remember where I wanted go with them and no longer being interested in the story. I'm sorry if you liked these stories but I'll be posting new ones soon. Hope you all are well 

fluffy-marco

Hey guys im sorry to say that this account will no longer be active after this posting, i  am writing more but i wont be posting on his site anymore. bagnato.desiree@gmail.com email me if youd like to know when i will move to another site. i will be moving a ffew of the stories from here to there soon. Im sorry for not posting and then leaving.  hope you find my stories again and like what ive changed. See yah doll

fluffy-marco

I'm looking to start a new story soon i need some help to see if its any good. please help me
          
          
          
          Play With Me
          
          It was thirteen to the day that he went missing, and four weeks tell the anniversary of Matthews disappearance, she was eleven what her brother and best friend went missing.  Those few weeks were branded in her mind, the sounds of her mother screaming and her father trying to soothe her. Missy was told by many that she was lucky it wasn’t her, but she didn’t feel lucky, she lost her twin and best friend within a month. Officers asked her what she saw when Henry went missing and when Mattie went missing, she would always say the same thing, she was reading when it happened. But that didn’t mean she didn’t notice when her brother left or when Henry walked away and didn’t come back, she just didn’t say that to them. But she saw the blood, she knew what had happened, she understood everything. Missy was very aware that they told her parents that she would need someone to talk to, she knew why the lady in pink was talking to her, she knew the thoughts the woman was having about her, how she stared at her purple eyes and blue hair and silently called her a freak. She was used to it, and in some cases laughed at how people thought their minds were safe when she could look at them and know their darkest secrets.
          “good day officers”
          Missy then jumped off the coach and walked over to her little brothers play pin and took him out. He giggled at the police officers as they walked up stairs to his bedroom.
          
          
          heres the first paragraph im working on. please tell me what you think! Thank you so much!!

killprim

Me: Your welcome :)
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fluffy-marco

@doodleboss @fluffy-marco thank you so much for reading it. I may have a chapter up in a week or so please tell what you think. Again thank yoh for taking the time to read it.
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killprim

Me: I like it. It's confusing AND I LIKE THAT
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