In The Perfect World
Is on hold for now

I do read for read and comment for comment. :).

Hmm.. Nothing much to say. Just a random girl from a place very far away...

Very far away

(PS: live on Mars. Our technology is developed enough to each earth's internet servers)

xd. Ok, Enough joking. I'm just a random girl that likes writing anything that pops in my head. I think I even feel a poem coming on!

(I would post my newer stuff, but this one is sweeter. :))


Little puppy sleeping so
Siblings eating happily.
What many things you don't know,
You're not growing rapidly.

Soon the puppy yawns and wakes,
he yells out a sickening cry,
his leg stiffen and he shakes,
I hope this time he won't die.

Princes whines and grabs he pup,
She drops him in the corner,
her tongue licks him not to rough,
luckily he than softens more.

Again the brown puppy sleeps,
Seizure over, fifth today,
at one week old he is weak,
hope he grows enough to play.

Little puppy sleeping so,
don't die, don't die, please don't go.

RIP Peter Pepper. A little puppy I love so dearly.

Anyways be sure to check out my Quotev also. (http://www.quotev.com/dohorcadrg ). I'm currently working on In The Perfect World; and I love opinions, comments, and critiques. Even if it is just criticism. We all need criticism to improve our writing lol.

Oh also here's my D.A. (http://horsegril333.deviantart.com/ ). My profile pic was drawn by me. (And the covers are edited by me. I may not be the best, but I guess it's alright.)

Anyways, that's all about me! :).
  • JoinedFebruary 9, 2015

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dohorcadrg dohorcadrg Dec 30, 2016 11:47PM
I'm still working on my story, In The Perfect World. (Just working out some stuff behind the scenes. ) I think I'll just finish writing the pre story before I decide what to do.. 
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