Hello! My name is Katie. Thank you for visiting my profile! The reason I joined this site awhile ago was to, like everyone else, share my stories. However, I am currently taking a break from writing so I can focus on work but also editing and critiquing. The information below will help you better understand who I am but also what I do to help others on this site..

I have been an editor for several sites, so if you want me to edit your story, I would be glad to but I do have limits. You can PM me if you need something to be edited, but my editing process is done via email. I also have a page/word limit. This can be discussed further via PM.

I also critique and this is also free. My aim on here is help, not to discourage, and I do not require a follow/vote/etc. Please note that many people have found my critiques 'harsh', and some have removed them. I only do constructive criticism and critique in an objective point of view. So yes, I may be brutally honest if needed, but I would never insult anyone. I apologize in advance if I have hurt anyone's feelings. I assure you, that was not my intent. Lastly, I edit and critique SLOWLY, so please be patient with me. Sometimes I may critique just two stories a day, and edit one chapter a day as well. I put in a lot of effort and time doing this for you for free, so your patience is all I ask for in return. ~dP~

~Story Achievements Of All Time~
"We are One, and I am Many" #31 under Horror; #57 under Fantasy
"Diary of a Wraith" #26 under Paranormal; 30 under Horror

~Best Responses From My Editing/Critiques~
"Omg! Where have you been all this time? I've been looking for an editor like you since I started writing in WP. Thanks so much for the advice, I'll be improving my writing. And, I'm really happy you liked it. :)" -@AppleBookWorm
"This is awesome! Thanks for such a thorough critique! I've filled all your criticisms away for when I'm editing and all your praise for when I'm needing an ego boost." -@taylorrae
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darkphoenix1836 darkphoenix1836 Jun 18, 2014 01:00AM
As of today, I will not be accepting any new critiquing requests in order for me to catch up. Everyone who has posted on my board who have requested a critique from me will be done, though please be...
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Diary of a Wraith
A sliver of humanity was our greatest punishment. We could not talk, nor hear, but only write. Writing came t...
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