dallonmonthes

maybe if im still into the peterick biz i'll redo 'it's the end of the world as we know it'

dallonmonthes

maybe if im still into the peterick biz i'll redo 'it's the end of the world as we know it'

dallonmonthes

okay y'all! first three revised chapters of Critical Veins are now on my account! go check it out!

dallonmonthes

ok so for the critical veins rewrite, i think i'll just upload in bursts (multiple chapters at a time) instead of all at once/one at a time. i'll also be including an author's note at the end of each chapter detailing the changes i made and such.

dallonmonthes

i'm going to ATTEMPT to rewrite/revise critical veins. i can't promise i'll finish it or even publish it (because i want to complete a whole revision instead of publishing in parts) but yea. i wanna make the writing better, more concise, and tie up some weird loose ends or just general misunderstandings on my behalf (bc i was in 6th grade when i wrote it and had zero clue how high school worked lmao. i am now a senior). i'll be doing it as a separate book and then i'll probably post an update to the original saying there's a revised version out, bc i wouldn't wanna wipe away all the comments and reactions on the OG book. ok bye

dallonmonthes

no but like what if i completely rewrote critical veins (revised it basically)

rustaroundtherxm

That’d be really neat actually.
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dallonmonthes

omgfbdh why are ppl still reading my shitty peterick fic i wrote in 6th grade  and to think i'm turning 18 later this yr... man time flies but also guys plz stop reading that atrocity 

TehArtsyAuthor

I relate to this so much 
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dallonmonthes

i lowkey wanna write a vamp!alex turner fanfic but like ,,,, i havent done the whole fanfic biz in a while so idk how well i am at it,,,, not to mention i am the Worst at consistently updating

dallonmonthes

the fact tht ppl are still reading my fic i wrote when i was in 6th grade baffles me,,,  like bro that was almost five years ago wowza people are still into peterick???

dallonmonthes

im a whole ass junior in high school man now whoa
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