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Pagtatapos na ang unang buwan para sa unang kabanata

Budsss_eop

Hello Po, I'm one of the admin sa GC  (WATTTPAD FAM). I'm very impressed sa story mo, I like happy endings (Gusto ko parin may season 2,3 etc magaganap haha) alam ko naman mapapagod ka pero I'm here to support your story. May mga errors naman napansin ko, may mga words kasi na palaging nauulit sa isang sentence kaya nakakalito rin minsan pero overall naman maganda and very good ending ang story. Keep it up Authorrr!! Sorry kung hindi masyado ako nag cocomment sa mga stories mo, Nagsisilent reader kasi ako minsan pero You did the story nice and clean din yung flow. Good luck, Can't wait to see you become a successful writer. 
          
          -Svenwriter
          
          

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