ToxicRhino

3 chapters in 3 days? Impossible. New chapter up!

TheWorstCompany

@GoldenAdrien You know what I said. 
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Trolltyrant21

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Is your novels safe free from any wifu/harem rape or ntr I mean after the whole betrayed part
          
          Hopefully your betrayed novels don’t have the mc take back the girls that betrayed the mc it’s bullshit when authors pull that shit those girls shuld not be back in the mcs life 
          
          It’s like if your girl or girls fuck with anouther guy you don’t let her come back to you shes out of your life your a cuck if you let her back in your life
          
          To let someone who betrays you back in your life is to let toxic back into your life
          
          

ToxicRhino

@Trolltyrant21 if you’re someone who gets mad easily and can’t continue reading if something makes you mad, I’d skip FoB
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ToxicRhino

Hmmm my book, at least I hope, is a little more complex than that. The feelings in it aren’t just “I forgive you” or “I hate you” the mc has genuine reasons for what he does. His relationship with Blake is complex and isn’t just fixed by a little bit of romance. On top of that, there’s no rape or NTR don’t worry 
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Jackson560

So I have two questions about you're Flame of Betrayal book. My first one is are there lemons and if there is their one for each character or are like threesomes and foursomes. My second question is how close to finishing you're Flame of Betrayal are you. I'm not trying to rush you or anything ij want to know, and if you don't know or don't want to say that's fine. The most important question is the first one. Thanks man, I love the book its really good and I enjoy reading it.

ToxicRhino

@Anthonyplays01 I’ve signified the chapters where there are lemons I think, so just keep a look out
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Anthonyplays01

@ToxicRhino is there gonna be something to identify the chapters with lemons in them or a sperate book for them
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ToxicRhino

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I took a break from the lemons for a bit after a while, but yes there are lemons and eventually there’s going to be one for each character individually and then going on from that point. As for your second question, I originally estimated FoB was going to be about 50 or so chapter, well I fucking destroyed that limit easily. I’d expect 100 to be the maximum number of chapters by my guesses
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Rex8792

Hey, love the story but I cant seem to find the discord link in the profile.

Rex8792

Thats unfortunate thanks a ton tho, best wishes love the story.
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ToxicRhino

Hey! So I actually end up leaving the discord server. It ended up turning into a...less than fun place to be. So we’re in the process of creating one right now. Much more work than I expected! But once it’s ready I will DM you a link! Thanks for the question!
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ToxicRhino

Hey everyone, sorry if you saw the uploads but here is update 1.1!
          
          - Fixed grammar and spelling issues in chapter 1
          - Separated chapter one into two chapters. Flashback chapter is its own thing now while the meetup is in part 2.
          - Fixed the over abundance of edge and added in some more thoughtful wording and actions. 
          - More action and descriptions. 
          - Set up better starts for foreshadowing. 
          - Made the MC less unbearable.
          - Removed Herobrine
          
          Basically I am going to go back through and fix a lot of the overarching issues with the chapters up to a certain point. Some chapters won’t change at all, but some will be completely rewritten. I hope you guys can enjoy them as I go. Progress on The Apple of Adam Pt 2 is continuing as well! Thanks for your patience guys, love you all! 

Supplyfool07

Sims 3 patch notes but for Wattpad
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TheWorstCompany

@ToxicRhino why'd you remove herobrine B'^( 
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ZanderSlade

@ToxicRhino The Removed Herobrine is a nice touch, but is just further proof you are an absolute dweeb
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BedrockBoy2

Please don’t stop writing your books they are very good.
          (The only reason I am saying this is for support because some of my favorite authors have deleted their accounts and stories so I don’t want you to do that too.)

ToxicRhino

@Gokhan2315 wattpad more than likely took down his account, it was taken down by a friend or family member, or it was inactivated due to inactivity or something t 
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Gokhan2315

@Andrew930783 I mean, I can't find his stories anymore, do you know what happened?
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Andrew930783

@Gokhan2315 GreySlate died.
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