TFC_PMC

I'm fairly certain I can consider the next chapter of the Revenge of the Assassin successfully reworked. It's now called restoration. Not entirely sure how I feel about it but I hadn't really left myself much room to work with, so I hope you all enjoy it lol

dindjarin123

Hey, I was wondering when you are going to update The Revenge of The Assassin.

TFC_PMC

@dindjarin123 I will be at some point buddy. I've been working on it's chapters from start to finish in order to convert them to a new format. But rn I've been busy with work. Once I have what I'm doing out of the way, which I believe will be tomorrow, I might be able to make some headway, no promises though.
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TFC_PMC

I'm fairly certain I can consider the next chapter of the Revenge of the Assassin successfully reworked. It's now called restoration. Not entirely sure how I feel about it but I hadn't really left myself much room to work with, so I hope you all enjoy it lol

TFC_PMC

Alrighty. I actually had a bit of fun reediting this chapter. Not entirely sure what I named the chapter before the change but now it's called Fallen but not Broken. One thing about Ezra's dynamic that I've tried to change is that he doesn't start out inherently evil as he constantly appeared in the first version, never really doing much change or growth. So hopefully this newer version is much better for you all to enjoy.

VodkaComrad

@TFC_PMC enjoying it very much, good job
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F_G_Luck

Hey! Would you like to read my star wars story? I would love to know what you think! :)
          
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F_G_Luck

@ TheBlackWingedKing  Tomorrow I'll be coming home from the holidays and I'll definitely give it a look!
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TFC_PMC

@TheBlackWingedKing also, as you probably noticed my other post lol. I just updated the starting chapters of my other book, Revenge of the Assassin, if you wanted to give that one a glance lol
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F_G_Luck

@ TheBlackWingedKing  Oh Cool!
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TFC_PMC

Alright. Part 4 of Revenge of the Assassin has finally got it's rework and to say it was an absolute ass to update would be an understatement but hey! It's done. No name change on this one, still referred to as The Last Assassin but you'll certainly notice a lot more details as to place Ezra's true capabilities against certain people and a better understanding of who he is.

dindjarin123

Hey really love 'The Bounty Hunter' and ' Revenge Of The Assassin'. I was thinking you should maybe reference 'Ezio' or 'Allaïr'. Really enjoy your work. Keep cranking it out.

TFC_PMC

@dindjarin123 Thank you very much. And in terms of a reference, I had thought about it but it wouldn't really suit considering that the SW galaxy is detached from what we would call 'our' galactic history. Meaning that the two branches of assassins would never know of each other's existence.
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TFC_PMC

That moment when you realise that one of your chapters has scenes worth up to several chapters worth so you're going to have to update it to like 14k words plus. RIP

TFC_PMC

Something I do find mildly amusing (in a sarcastic sense) is that whenever you look upon your own work in disgust at how poorly written it was and decide to go back and improve it- barely anyone will notice or even comment upon it. I have some many stories that are left unfinished but when I actually try to fix one so that it can be continued- it seems like nobody is even interested

CjGardiner

@TFC_PMC I feel ur pain 100%
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ZacharyHall4

To be honest I like a lot of your books especially assassin and the bounty hunter one as well 
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TFC_PMC

@ZacharyHall4 thank you lol. I literally have been seeing activity in every other story of mine. Like every single one but ROTA have been getting love lately and I'm just sat here like "Yeah, I'm doing what I promised like a year ago, have a look please" XD
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TFC_PMC

Quite happy to say that the third chapter of Revenge of the Assassin has now been reworked. Although small alterations might still come to particular bits if it suits me, what's now the current version is the main storyline