Nick Tamboia

I do a lot of reading, both books and here. I also love to write. My writing swings between humor, sarcastic humor, to fantasy, and paranormal stories, some of which I may at some point put up here. I am looking for feedback on my writing, as I am learning, and not yet sure of how I sound to others. I know what's in my head, but I am unsure if I am relaying that to the readers correctly. I am also not really sure if what I find cute and funny, is what others do, so I would love to know. . . Lastly, in regards of my profile picture. I have been told often that I look like actor, Rick Moranis, but I am not him, at least that I know. However, I maybe his silly, Sith, clone . . .

I have actually begun to wonder if I should tone down these two stories I have here, give them a little bit of a magical twist and target a younger audience.