MelodyofChaos

Hello my lovely readers, it has been a long time hasn't it? As you may or may not have noticed, I've started rewriting Can You Hear Me? and have started posting the chapters in a new story (aptly titled Can You Hear Me? *REWRITE* 
          	
          	Thank you all for being patient with me and my prolonged absence. I hope you'll enjoy~

moonchhu

@MelodyofChaos we missed you so much! glad you're back! 
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Crazy_Booknerd

@MelodyofChaos Bless the stars! I saw the *discontinued* on the original and thought you were just leaving us hanging! 
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straighttacos

OH MY GOD!!!!!
          
          Im so happy to see that you will be back on to rewrite your story "can you hear me?". I read that growing up and fell in love with it, but never finished the story as life got busy and i needed to get off of all fan fic sites for a while. 
          
          Great to know youre back at it and gonna do your best!! Dont stress yourself out and take your time as we love you and will be here for you when you need us!! 

bro_is_my_job

Hey Author bro! I just wanted to say how much your work ment to me when I was younger. You won't believe how excited I was when I heard you were doing a rewrite! I also have a few questions about your work but I don't want to bother you so if you somehow is this and you want to I will ask them also a short message from 12 year old me : HOW DARE TO BREAK MY HEART YOU SOULLESS HEATHEN!?!
          thank you for your time.

bro_is_my_job

@MelodyofChaos hahaha sorry! Sometimes I get carried away with my questions but anyway thank you so much for answering them it really clears a lot up! Hope I didn't take up too much of your time and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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MelodyofChaos

@HBPwings That's certainly quite the list of questions! Hopefully the following answers help clear things up, though I don't want to get too spoilery.
            
            Mitchell is out, and Peter is in. (y/n) isn't engaged anymore, so that whole section will be altered to fit the new relationships or removed entirely. I might add something or someone else to fill the odd gap Mitchell left, but right now I don't have any plans too. The decision to make the switch was a combination of things- I honestly wasn't super happy with the Mitchell/(y/n) dynamic in the original. I mostly did it for the drama, not because it made actual sense in the story I was trying to tell. When I was planning that first version, Mitchell was supposed to be the brother anyway, but again I changed it to fiance for the potential drama. I think the brother/sister dynamic will end up working out better, and it was one of the main reasons I decided to rewrite the story instead of just tacking on an ending. 
            
            The ending will probably end up being similar to the originals, but I'm actually going to give it a conclusion, not some half baked part two that doesn't make any sense. I had (and still sometimes have) an issue with trying to fit too many things in one story, so I'm going to narrow down the ending and actually end it.
            
            The human characters will be in the story more, don't you fret. Not sure how much more, but more then they have been. I just wanted to establish the relationship with the monsters a bit first. 
            
            Honestly? The Hall of Frame thing was mostly for the pun lol. But yes, also because I established the photography thing in the original and didn't do anything else with it.
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bro_is_my_job

@MelodyofChaos hey dude! Didn't think you would respond if I'm being honest (12 year old me is quaking). Anyway my questions are will Mitchell be coming back into the story or is he completely gone? If so what inspired you to swap out Mitchell with Peter? And also will you be changing some of the last chapters of the original story completely and will there even be the same revelation at the end? Also how do you plan to integrate Sans and the other monsters finding out about Y/N being engaged and its aftermath in the rewrite if at all? And will we be seeing more of the human characters in the rewrite eg. Chris, Peter and Rocky (if your adding him)? And last question! Was the 'hall of fame' a nod to the photos frisk takes to document the resets or maybe Y/Ns thing being taking pictures in the ice skating chapter? Or am I just pulling at threads? Also side note for fun I decided to make a floor plan of the ground level of the cabin for fun but its not very good hahaha
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MelodyofChaos

Hello my lovely readers, it has been a long time hasn't it? As you may or may not have noticed, I've started rewriting Can You Hear Me? and have started posting the chapters in a new story (aptly titled Can You Hear Me? *REWRITE* 
          
          Thank you all for being patient with me and my prolonged absence. I hope you'll enjoy~

moonchhu

@MelodyofChaos we missed you so much! glad you're back! 
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Crazy_Booknerd

@MelodyofChaos Bless the stars! I saw the *discontinued* on the original and thought you were just leaving us hanging! 
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