KrisBlack

First chapter of the second book of Of Beast and Beauty is up! Check out Of Snow and Blood now!! 

amrutha-s-nair

@KrisBlack when will you update the next chapter
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SabrinaFantasy

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MidgieWrites

The plot of My enemy, My mate was good but there were things that would have made the book even more good. Why did they keep on trying to sacrifice themselves so much when they didn't need to? Why didn't she become overwhelmed with emotions when death was mentioned in the courtroom and start screaming about the death of her baby? It seemed like her father's bad deeds were just left unspoken, like he never did those things? How couldn't Jackson think of a plan to counter her father's doings? Alpha's are usually depicted as possessive, aggressive, cunning if you will, Jackson is none of that. He doesn't fit the criteria of a Alpha, his character feels more like a lower ranked wolf in his pack. He's so helpless. The fight that killed her father was also...yeah no. Unrealistic. Her body was suppose to be weak, she is in recovery from starving herself for long periods of time and recovering from the beating she recieved. With her father being the Alpha and Gary being the Beta, she HAD to have multiple broken bones and that takes a while to heal. All of that combined should have killed her. 

MidgieWrites

@MidgieWrites in the hands of a starved, without training, weak bodied daughter? Even if anger was what feuled her, her body was too weak and she should have died. Brendan also being the Alpha is kinda wierd for me. He was just following her father around and doing what he said. Can't imagine him being a great Alpha. Also, how did her father become Alpha? Maybe I missed that part though. Also it's funny how she never encountered a guard on her way into the pack after the wedding. The story is missing alot of werewolf elements. ALSO, the court or council didn't even question Jackson regarding the death of Gary. Aren't they suppose to ask "what was said that provoked Jackson?"? They moved on to the next issue without all the evidence. Supposedly her father can't challenge Jackson and the council said so yet allowed it anyway? I enjoyed some parts of the story but I wish there wasn't so many plot holes. 
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promiseyarbrough1

Good morning I was wondering will there be any updates to Of Snow and Blood

ZARA_456

@promiseyarbrough1 She's released it on amazon. But from the comments on there it seems to end on another cliffhanger. But no mention of a third book. Shame since she is a really good writer
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lil_bambi04

@promiseyarbrough1 fr because I am invested in it now?????
            
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