JosieMayX3

Just a reminder for everyone reading this story, there will be themes of suicide, hallucinations, self harm, things of that nature. I obviously will have TW before any explicit scenes but just a forewarning that there’s plenty of inner monologue from characters who are mentally ill. If this will harm your mental health or be triggering please don’t continue reading the story thus dfar. If you want to DM me asking for details regarding triggering subjects I’d be glad to answer because I wouldn’t want anyone to be triggered by my work. 
          	
          	 

JosieMayX3

Just a reminder for everyone reading this story, there will be themes of suicide, hallucinations, self harm, things of that nature. I obviously will have TW before any explicit scenes but just a forewarning that there’s plenty of inner monologue from characters who are mentally ill. If this will harm your mental health or be triggering please don’t continue reading the story thus dfar. If you want to DM me asking for details regarding triggering subjects I’d be glad to answer because I wouldn’t want anyone to be triggered by my work. 
          
           

JosieMayX3

Dark mode is ruining my carefully crafted CHAPTER DIVIDERS IM TRYING TO MAKE IT LOOK N I C E but i can’t make the art into a transparent png for some reason so if you’re in dark mode i’m sorry pretend it looks good it looks good in light mode i’ll figure out what to do about it in the future :/

JosieMayX3

I haven’t abandoned the story! Once again, i’m sorry updates have grinded to a near halt, in fact i hadn’t even realized how much time had passed without updating until i checked today. I cannot guarantee frequent updates just yet, but i never intend on abandoning the story. So one way or another, it WILL be updated. I hope you all are staying safe, much love!
          
          ~Josie

NourAH3

@JosieMayX3 thank youuu we're waiting anxiously for the updates :))
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JosieMayX3

I chose a REALLY bad time for a hiatus, lol. I’ve been going through quite a time lately. I wanna make content for you guys without stretching myself too thin, and i just took a long break so i’ll try to upload continuously, it just might be slow for the next while.
          
            Anyways stay safe if you’re going protesting and BLM! 
          
               -Josie

JosieMayX3

this message may be offensive
Do you ever read a typo you made and take 7 points of damage?
          
          “He shit his eyes”
          
          
          
          F O U R S E P E R A T E T I M E S 

JosieMayX3

Readers: Please miss? A crumb of content?
          
          Me: Angels swallow grit
          
          Readers: Please miss, it’s been a hard wint-
          
          Me: Other angels can digest forks

JosieMayX3

Apologies for the long time with no new chapters! I got super caught up in merging and editing that I forgot that the most important thing is WRITING. And that as long as new content is coming out at a reasonable pace, I can always go back and fix it up. As a note, the next few chapters aren’t going to be very long, but I’m going to really try and get back on schedule with new actual story coming out. 
          
          -Josie❤️❤️

JosieMayX3

Not to mention flu and holiday season kinda kicked my butt for a good few weeks :\ it happens 
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JosieMayX3

New update on the chapter editings! As you may have noticed, merging chapters means that all the parts behind the first one are deleted, thus erasing their word count, votes, and comments. So the read count is going to fluctuate a lot for the next few weeks, but I don’t particularly mind. Also be aware that if you commented, you comment will be gone. It breaks my heart but i promise you i have screenshots of my favorite messages and comments and I hope you all would like to read again and leave more of your wonderful thoughts in the months to come :)
          
          -Josie❤️❤️
          

JosieMayX3

Okay so i wrote my thoughts on the report before this, but the message exceeded the max length so uh,, I’ll try to be brief.
          
          The feature is overall very smooth, and covers around 3 bases for your story. Style, accessibility, and length.
          
          Style is divided into a handful of different categories and it bases yours on unique writing practices that different genres and authors use. 
          
          Accessibility is age range. This one I think could use some work. Because yes, while my word choice is simple, there’s a few choice words in there, and some themes later on in the story, where i wouldn’t consider it an adolescents book. And give it a 13+ around rating, for now.
          
          Length was fairly insightful, but it told me my story and chapters were in fact, very short. It did however give some good insights on how to lengthen a chapter without dulling it. 
          
          There were also some features covering the use of adverbs and word repetition. Which I think could be very useful to a lot of new authors who make those rookie mistakes. 
          
          Overall I would say wait until you are well into your story for the report, as it can give you more accurate and helpful results that way! I couldn’t go as far in depth as I wanted to, because of the word limit. But if you have any questions you can pop into my inbox and I’ll be glad to tell more and answer any questions! 
          
          -Josie❤️❤️❤️