Tanjiro!

Hi okay lang ba kung mabigyan mo ako ng honest feedback para sa prologue ko? Hindi ko kasi alam kung ipagpapatuloy ko pa yung pagsusulat o hindi. Sana mapagbigyan mo. Thank you and God bless
          
          Here is the link po:
          Second Happy Ending
          https://www.wattpad.com/916880387-second-happy-ending-on-going-prologue

 Hello co-army! I'm just a underrated writer here, but I hope you'll read my BTS FANFICS:
          
          •encountering min yoongi
          •kim namjoon's charm
          
          I would really really appreciate it if you'll give it a try, it means everything to me, aasahan ko po talagang babasahin mo ang story ko kahit masakit umasa. Godbless po at keep safe❤️
          
          Mabuhay!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/205961730-encountering-min-yoongi-m-y-g-tagalog-fanfic