GrimThor3

My apologies for ghosting Wattpad for a bit. I have too much stuff going on in my life (mainly the hell that is college). At the request of many (I was honestly surprised by the amount) users messaging me, asking to bring back the original Retired book so they can read it. I will still be working on the revisions for the updated Retired; however, don't expect me to post anytime soon. I wish for everyone to have a great start of the new year!

GrimThor3

My apologies for ghosting Wattpad for a bit. I have too much stuff going on in my life (mainly the hell that is college). At the request of many (I was honestly surprised by the amount) users messaging me, asking to bring back the original Retired book so they can read it. I will still be working on the revisions for the updated Retired; however, don't expect me to post anytime soon. I wish for everyone to have a great start of the new year!

PauloKimBrillantes5

thats why it is only 9 Chapters.. the story is awesome and comprehensive You really are something. or maybe you are a spy hehe. 

rot1109

highly recommended!! you need to read Retired guys!! its awesome! yeah just read it, dont know how to promote it with words. main charactet is so cooool!! i want to be like him hahaha 

GrimThor3

The first rain of summer has hit my town. In celebration, I will publish the first 9 chapters, first 41 pages, of the newly updated Retired. I will also like to announce that I will be entering the book for the 2018 Wattys Award.

charles2602

@GrimThor3 when will you post the upcoming chapters of Retired?
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Saurabh_sharma

@GrimThor3  By what time would we be getting the full version of it..?
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boopberry

Oooooooh, no wonder I couldn't find it
          I didn't know that u unpublished it for a while

relon45

Can not wait for the revised Retired,,, great story,,, I look forward to reading it. I would appreciate a heads up when you re-post.

GrimThor3

I'm sorry to current readers of Retired. I am planning on making major changes to Retired over the summer. This will include many comments that I have read like:
          - Filling plot holes
          - Making the romance more believable and less sudden
          - More badass scenes
          - Fixing chapter lengths
          - More attention to details
          And more!
          However, until then, Retired will not be visible on Wattpad. When I do republish, there will also be another bonus chapter for you guys

JideeTroll123

@GrimThor3 Its okay we understand ypur decision
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GrimThor3

A wild update of Fantasy World Online appears! Sorry to everyone who wants a new update. I apologize. My first semester in college was pretty time consuming. Expect more updates throughout the next 30ish days. Next semester updates may not occur because I have harder classes