DhariniPatel7

Please someone tell me what to do with my first story whoever is going to tell me what should I do with my story first of all please read my story and tell me what do you think about my first story 

XianofWang

@DhariniPatel7 this trope is good. But keep a eye for toxic readers. I also think it's a very good and different. You will own this AU. Go on! Write the drafts and publish it. I'll support it. I'll vote, I'll comments and everything. Afterall you supported me when I was a messy writer. Happy writing dear. Please publish it. I'm eager to help. And curious about the story line
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XianofWang

@DhariniPatel7 maybe. Sorry for not noticing honey. There was a connectivity problem in my country. I think if you take past as consideration first. If they were actually supportive, neutral or changed sides and doubted Wwx. If they did then, show how desperate they are to get Wwx forgiveness and how much regret they have. Like, you have to portray their feelings and realization. And then Wwx, being the pure soul who wants to take care of A-Yuan now and knows that everything is now broken. Can't be repaired or replaced. So he just moves on but never forgets. But for A-Yuan, he leaves the cultivation world and erase all traces which located him. 
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DhariniPatel7

Do you think that lan and jiang siblings deserves a second chance to make right choices by going to the past 
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XianofWang

Hey dear, Help me select names for Wangxian babies ! Please I'm in chaos and mess. Go to the Author's note and select names for all, birthnames and Courtesy names too please!!! And also let me know which new story you are interested in...

Madambutterfly10

Sending you greetings from California! Thanks for following me! I look forward to your support and welcome comments as well! I have 3 works (2 completed and one is ongoing). Check them out when you have time. Happy reading and may you always have sunny skies, warmth, love and laughter always! ❤️

DhariniPatel7

Please someone tell me what to do with my first story whoever is going to tell me what should I do with my story first of all please read my story and tell me what do you think about my first story 

XianofWang

@DhariniPatel7 this trope is good. But keep a eye for toxic readers. I also think it's a very good and different. You will own this AU. Go on! Write the drafts and publish it. I'll support it. I'll vote, I'll comments and everything. Afterall you supported me when I was a messy writer. Happy writing dear. Please publish it. I'm eager to help. And curious about the story line
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XianofWang

@DhariniPatel7 maybe. Sorry for not noticing honey. There was a connectivity problem in my country. I think if you take past as consideration first. If they were actually supportive, neutral or changed sides and doubted Wwx. If they did then, show how desperate they are to get Wwx forgiveness and how much regret they have. Like, you have to portray their feelings and realization. And then Wwx, being the pure soul who wants to take care of A-Yuan now and knows that everything is now broken. Can't be repaired or replaced. So he just moves on but never forgets. But for A-Yuan, he leaves the cultivation world and erase all traces which located him. 
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DhariniPatel7

Do you think that lan and jiang siblings deserves a second chance to make right choices by going to the past 
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