Marco_Aurelius

Look, I know this might sound like something I should've said a long time ago but you've been a part of me more than I've allowed you to be. All  I'm saying is Larry Davis I have never felt to have belonged to someone else or fit in the mold by any regular standards until you came. It felt like you walked by the street one summer morning and saw a sad little boy on the stall and claimed him for yourself, not that I didn't want to but damn you should have given me some kind of warning. -Florante and Larry and The Last Days of Summer
          
          Haha, I really enjoyed doing the second rounds of edit.

“Nothing…nothing. Uhm, We’re moving back to the US after graduation, when summer’s over. I think I ought to tell you…” 
          “>>>>>>><<<<<<” 
          “Hey, you still there?” 
          No, I was no longer here, or there, or anywhere on earth. In fact, I’ve been sucked inside a black hole and transported to another universe where you didn’t exist and I did not have to deal with all this pain right now, Larry. But now, I am still very much here on earth, because black holes were lies made up by the man on a book who looked like he’d never known shower. I was still very much here on earth, wishing I wasn’t so I never had to deal with a world without your smiles Larry Davies. "-Florante and Larry and The Last Days Of Summer.

Had both sad and fun time rewriting this chapter: https://www.wattpad.com/1352967239-florante-and-larry-and-the-last-days-of-summer   It's a special chapter cos it kinda gives a short background on Florante's life as a kid and how it shaped him later in his adolescent years.

Edited Florante and Larry; significant reduction on the number of words and some scenes from the original draft. You may read the initial 16 edited chapters here: https://www.wattpad.com/1352967239-florante-and-larry-and-the-last-days-of-summer

Editing is twice as hard as writing the first draft. Who's with me? 

Choose one thing that you wanna do for the rest of your life and spend the rest of your life doing it. There are days when things get rough and you'll lose sight of what's in front of you. Keep pushing. Just because you can't see the finish line doesn't mean it's not there. Believe that you can.You don't need to win every battle. You just need to win the war.  Pick-up your shield and draw your sword. Fight for your place in this world. 

Rene's letter has arrived! Happening here in Chapter 10: https://www.wattpad.com/story/267751906?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=DannBritts&wp_originator=y2w7R6KR60e2eixHvQg0z3kd7cD4tvkTN8M9mZwL9Uvh8avpa%2FNc%2FhhZjjiW9nPYsnxR0tVKa6pM5jDzpUmFEPkc4x1qtoWlq6Yt2j6naB8b27narQKVD9acY%2Bq3MULP

I always take pride in incorporating my heritage on my writing and this chapter proved just that: 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/267751906?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=DannBritts&wp_originator=cdUgmI7OD%2BSiNZA1bR%2BILSqZys1IfxD%2F0a9BP5d62IPlx3DZORbgj1EruzBBxTJ0GSGJm6a42fnJv6RS4K0n2sigDJqFkVINXg%2BkbcX2cbR4YxeSWLulMhUBId0ewykd 
          
          Imma sleep now, good night everyone. 

I heard so much about ONC, what does that mean and how does one join?

Chapter 7 is the inciting incident in this story. This propels the rest of the events in the book. You can read it here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/267751906?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=DannBritts&wp_originator=JHzZm2HjVf%2BVoneQiPw3SjW3kj05%2BMcY3L7%2BNZD5D8wFkIbYP1R50gdbdIZqJ4rTrsBe6KXrWX8qFdPVIUeT2OtIuHk18J5JSrZHW2ao%2B4WZlRhcP%2BBYRO2MSMz3PbJ1