Rubyfanguy12
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@BlakeHuffGaming dog, if you don’t mind me asking, idk if I have or not, but can you give me a full length feedback of my story? Like how is it? The storyline, action, romance, arcs, references, shit like that you know? You don’t have to, but it would be a great help for future chapters
BlakeHuffGaming
I honestly enjoy every second of it, the story mixes well and I can clearly see what going on by the way you write.
The action is amazing! I’ve writing a few action scenes by myself but the way you write it is WAY better then how u write it.
The Romance isn’t rushed, they got to know each other more before being a couple, which is really good unlike a few I’ve read that have it extremely rushed.
I enjoyed the Heaven Arc (is that right?) you made, I honestly got hooked on it and was surprised at the end of it.
You’re an amazing writer, and I can wait as long as it’s needed to see what else you planned on doing next.
