The Faery Reminiscences

"She went through an indeterminate destiny, venturing on an enchanted marl. She met the divine guardian who held a blessing of her fecundate fortune. A glorious legacy has been bestowed upon her. But no map leads to the glory along with love. Either of one, will perish."

Hello everyone, It's my first time submitting a story in English. So I am quite nervous now. Hope I did it well. Give it a read maybe, and let me know your opinion.
Thanks... :)