first day of school

The story is about 2 10th grade girls, one is a stud and another is a sweet little innocent girl, the stud seduced her into having sex with her, you know what I'm talking way to much, just read it and see how it turns out, I'm not finished, y'all just gotta gimme some feedback so I can help y'all out, cause I feel like the story suck. But y'all might think differently.