Ocean of Doom

This is a little something I did. I have a story, I guess, but I don't know if it'll be well received so I'm posting an exerpt.
English isn't my first language so feel free to correct me if you want.
Tell me if it's enjoyable !

This is the story of Alice Riddle. In this chapter, she's been sent on a quest to retrieve something necessary later. Yes, I know, very specific but hey ! Too much infos isn't good either. Just give it a try, OK ? Maybe you'll like it.