Chapter 1 - The Scar in the Sky

This story deals with themes of depression and suicide. Do not read if these subject matters make you uncomfortable.

Sometimes when you feel like you have nothing left to live for, something happens that renews your will to live. That is what happened to Gary, a young man living on his own, isolated from the rest of the island. After a seemingly endless line of rock bottoms, something happens that gives him a purpose.

I've been working on this story for three, maybe four years now. I really hope to get it published some day, so I'd appreciate some feedback telling me what's good and what's not-so-good; I want to make it the best it can be. Please tell me what you like and don't like!