The Sky is Always Greener

Ben is a simple guy. Simple name. Simple life. He has a decent business job and a wonderful girlfriend but they're on and off. His life takes a turn for excitement when he walks into a place he suddenly regretted it. As he tries to balance this curve ball he faces other heavy hitters along the way like his mom and brother being in a car accident. He needs to figure out this serious problem in his life before it kills him.
This is my first short story published and I may have typos and grammatical errors but just tell me what you think!